Broken Fantasies: 2

There's some good panels, some bad. I hope you can read it. Questions, comments, randomocity? POST IT!

Notes--
1. In the panel where Brook's face is slightly blurred, the blurs are supposed to represent her old hair style and hat. It more of a way that Apollo recongizes her, so it's partly his vision.
2. Brook didn't see past the Colonel to veiw Apollo because the Colonel is such a large man, that he blocked the light and the doorway.
3. Brook is trying to seduce her way out of this troublesome situation.
4. Brook shouldn't be calling the Colonel 'boy'. He's the age of her granpa! :B
5. Throughout the scene the Colonel is getting slightly excited, in more ways than one, but there was just no way to convey it in the drawings for you to see.




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