This is so awesome, I'm beside myself. haha. The world is so different in color. It really looks fantastic, and your shading is really on point (I especially love it around her eyes on that last tiny panel in the bottom left corner; SO GOOD!). But yes, awesome. The fountain's water is beyond spectacular. I don't know how I would have approached that part, because I'm not much with the knowing-how-to-color, lol, but you pulled it off SO well.
Also funny, I'd been drawing these pages for so long, that even though I consciously knew Bella's hair was brown, I'd gotten so used to it being WHITE on the page, that it was like a whole new world when I saw her a proper brunette. haha. Really, you did a great job, and thanks so much for giving it the coloring treatment I don't know if I'll ever have the patience for providing myself.
Hahahaa, I'm so glad you like it! I'll probably do the next page too, just for practice. i leanred alot about composition, expressions, and overall motion from doing this, so I'm very eager to do it once more. It was alot of fun!
Oh I'm so glad to know you got something extra out of the process. That's awesome. I've been thinking about maybe color another person's work sometime in the future, because I think that not having to concentrate on the drawing really allow you to concentrate on other elements for a change. I'd like the relief and the new perspective. haha. And I'm looking forward to the pic when and if you do it.